Headlines should be strong and confident, without being too direct or wordy. By ensuring the statements contain meaningful context to communicate with the audience, we create compelling statements.
Before: Establishing important relationships. Diversify the crops in an emerging region to support their soil. Build resilient communities. | After: Establish relationships. Diversify crops. Build resilient communities. |
Before: Connect. Develop. Create meaningful impact. | After: Connect new markets. Develop strategies. Create meaningful impact. |
Before: You can digitize agriculture. We start by helping our stakeholders develop cost-saving ways to improve animal production. Together, we can disrupt entire industries across the world. | After: Digitize agriculture. Innovate animal production. Disrupt industries. |